Okay, just read chapter 1, and the hook is set! I don't know if the Indian is a threat or if this is a romance novel and they're going to take the story in that direction. The writing flows well, so it's easy to follow like a Grisham novel, so I'm excited to keep reading. The descriptions are already settling into my imagination.
I like the detailed descriptions along the way. It makes me nostalgic for growing up with guns, horses, and ranch animals.
--W. W. Carlson, Reno